Night Mistress

i still have one more chapter to put up before this story is complete. and i did have a birthday in June, My 17th Birthday.

It's good. but it's a little short. try add some more to it. and i think you are in the the wrong section.

I think it's pretty good. even though you don't like it. i think you should continue it.

it's interesting. Maybe you sould write a sequel to let the readers know if she ggoing to me alone or she is going to find another person.

it's....interesting.

Good. I hope you put up another piece soon.

i have never seen the BBC versions.

it's pretty good. though, i do agree with sokool15 that you are moving really fast. try to slow down. i hope you put up another piece soon.

Love part two. can't wait for part three.

Yay! you finished your story line. i love it. i hope you create another masterpiece like it.

It's creepy but i like it.

it's a little short. introduce your characters and strech it out.

Wow! her parents should be more concern with her grade in school. i hope you put up another piece soon.

I see a few mispells in your exerts.

I'm sorry. i accidentally post this chapter twice. sorry! :oops: